Wednesday, November 9, 2016

Doctor Strange: My Review

So, I saw Doctor Strange last weekend.



     As always with these reviews, I am going to first give a non-spoiler review of what I thought of the flick.  At the end, since this is a writing blog, I will state what I would have done differently, and that sometimes means injecting spoilers.  I still try and keep the spoilers light.

     This movie was everything we were promised.  Visually it was completely stunning.  The Acting was believable and even superb in some places. I absolutely loved it.

     Benedict Cumberbatch makes a great Doctor Strange; he manages to start out as an arrogant jerk who still manages to win you over by the end of the movie.  His character arc is essential to the plot and the way the big bad is defeated.  Chiwetel Ejiofor as Mordo was fantastic, and the promise of his character in future instalments is great.  If you remember him playing the Agent in Serenity you realize after the end of the credits in the last teaser how perfect he is for that part.  Tilda Swinton as the Ancient One ate up the screen any time she was on it.  Rachel McAdams was fine as the love interest, and the rest were good to great as well. 

     Plot wise, this is a Marvel movie.  While the essentials are different the structure is the same.  Start with flawed hero; put them through a new experience.  Use that experience to grow them.  Big coolness, big setback, and then overcome big evilness at the end.  While I enjoyed how they resolved the fight with the big bad at the end, I thought it was more unique of an idea then slugging it out.  (I can’t say more than that) the surprises are in how the story is told.  Not where it leads.

    Villain wise Mads Mikkelsen is fine.  He does his job as a big scary villain, but this movie has the same issue that most Marvel movies do.  You never feel any empathy for the bad guy and his nameless sidekicks.  Instead he is very two dimensional, and his reasoning for being bad is believable, but never developed to a point where I felt he was a full character.  He looks cool, he does his job and it works but it is not as great as it could be. 

     Now I hate 3D movies.  I have no desire to go stare at a screen and get motion sick for a couple of hours.  This movie if I were to see it again I would consider doing the 3D experience.  The visuals are that awesome.  I think all the mind bendy goodness works well and there are sets and moments that are just simply beautiful to stare at.

    Over all, I would give this move a solid A- minus.  The minus is for standard villain A, and underdeveloped love interest.

    Now beyond here is where any spoilers may be found.  If you read on and get spoiled it is not my fault.  You have been warned and I feel no guilt if you get upset.



    First of all, fix the villain.  This felt short for a Marvel movie, give me five to ten minutes where I see into his life and help me understand why he believes the way he does.  Or build up some empathy for him; let us see how he was broken when he came to the Ancient One.  The famous show, don’t tell conundrum.

    Second, Rachel McAdams never gets well developed as a love interest.  She is almost used more as a plot device at times, then as someone we see Doctor Strange having a serious relationship with.  I needed some more between them to establish some good chemistry.  Make that relationship believable.  I needed at the least for here to be somewhere at the end to make me believe that Doctor Strange would come back or want to continue his relationship with that character.  Instead the last we see of her is when the Ancient One dies, and then nothing.

    Pacing at the beginning might be fixed as well.  The only time I felt this show dragged was when they were establishing Strange’s character in the beginning.  This might just be me though.  The problem is I don’t know what I would cut, because most of the events that happen are important to the story.  Maybe tighten up a few moments?

    That is my feeling on this flick, how did you all feel about it.  For me it was a total win for Marvel, did anyone actually hate it?  Inquiring minds would like to know.

Ben Marble


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Tuesday, November 8, 2016

NaNoWriMo 2016

I'm all in for NaNoWriMo 2016



     This year has officially kicked off! I am excited and working on a book idea that I have been building to for years.  This book will take a modern day Elias, mix him with Jill a werewolf, and Jaiden a half vampire as they take on the demon who cursed Elias in the first place.  To be honest, if I get the job I applied for I have no idea how I will pull this off, but I'm going to do it!

     The Idea for this story has grown from several places.  The first book I finished writing was about Jaiden and his Journey as a half-vampire and discovering what he is and what that means.  That book was scrapped as I just didn’t think the story overall was strong, or that it resounded well with me.  But as with all books, I have several great ideas and a couple of characters that I have pulled out from the wreckage of that story.

     Elias I have been building up for some while.  All four short stories I have on amazon.com are related to either him directly, or in the case of “The Black Oak” it starts the events that push this story into motion.  I am finding it weird writing Elias in third person, after I have spent three shorts writing from his point of view, but hey, I am having fun with it.

     Jill is the other character that came from Jaiden’s book.  She is much different and hopefully better realized in this story.  We will see.

    The other big thing this year is I have taken a step back and I’m discovery writing instead of outlining.  Normally before I write I sit down and outline chapter 1-whatever and give what I want to accomplish in each chapter, what happens, and who’s POV it is written from.  This time I have trying to write differently.  It might kill me in the end, but I want to see how it works out with me having the basic story in mind, and my characters walking through it.

     My other stories have been put to the side for the moment.  Grimmack I am still waiting to hear back from a couple of agents, but I will be submitting him to a new round soon.  The Dragon’s apprentice just finished a full edit, and I plan on running through it one more time before submitting it out as well.  I love both stories for different reasons, and I hope eventually to have them out to folks in whatever format works best.

    As for this year’s NaNoWriMo?  With the shorts already being on Amazon.com, I plan on self-publishing it in the same manner.  If all goes well, it will be my first full-length book out on the market.




     What are you all doing for NaNoWriMo is the question now….

Ben Marble.


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